Monday, April 16, 2012

A Poet's Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.8

I've sat here for at least an hour,
Trying to make every word right,
But my brain is slowly losing power,
As I write on through the night.
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Christal Blue
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Alysza Ripley 26 November 2013

This is amazing. One, totally relatable, and two, I loved how you rhymed everything. There's also a very powerful message here. I love it!

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Hawkins Rodgers 29 May 2012

Haha, I can definitely relate.9/10 At least.

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Clinton Ekeh 25 April 2012

Just read through this piece of yours and its nothing short of brilliance. I like your rhyming prowess and the organisation of your thoughts.

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