I've sat here for at least an hour,
Trying to make every word right,
But my brain is slowly losing power,
As I write on through the night.
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Just read through this piece of yours and its nothing short of brilliance. I like your rhyming prowess and the organisation of your thoughts.
This is amazing. One, totally relatable, and two, I loved how you rhymed everything. There's also a very powerful message here. I love it!