Last night so cold my dear,
I'd been waitin' you came not to my ear
where were you, my love
gone I was shocked, prayed to God above
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Congratulations, Sylvia. This poem is ranked #76 in the best poems of members
Thank you so much, Unnikrishnan for your constant attentive observations concerning Best Member Poems. Thank YOU!
Thank you foryour words, Unnikrishnan. You are a true poet friend!
Today on number 79 Unnikrishnan, thank you so much for being alert
Beautiful, beautiful poem worth revisiting. Always love to read this poem and always amaze on how you expressed and crafted this poetic gem. To my favorites.
I am flattered, honoured and so happy to read your magnificent response. Thank you so much for this sublimest support
Perfect! Read this poem with interest. Each word is a piece of diamond... touching
What a brilliant poem dear poetess! You have meticulously comprehended a poet's heart. This poem carries value and precious substance! !
If everything goes well on a good understanding then waiting itself is a bliss...if other way it be it becomes a ...that is the nature of love....5*****
So it be, dear Mrs. Indira, your words speak of greatest wisdom, thank you Mrs. Indira, I appreciate highest your valuable comment. Especially the 5*****
Romantically crafted prose, great imagery, and wonderful feelings to your lover.
Always in gratitude for your great support, dear Lasaad Tayeb
Thank you so much dear Li Su Pen. I am very happy that you visit my poemsite.
Beautifully written...a poet heart is seen through the words, I love this poem!
Great spontanuety in your response, I like very much the way you respond so joyfully. It mirrors your great heart either. Thank YOU, Kevin
my heart begins to speak and redeems all the lies for the good truth.....adorable expression. My pleasure revisiting this great poem.
Thank you for your heart felt poem Sylvia, i'm sad now. i'm fine thank you. James.
A great poem.... pragmatic expression! This brilliant poem unfolds layers of meaning. You have provided enough substances through this fascinating piece of poetry to ponder on....my great pleasure reading this work of art time and again! Stay always happy and blessed!
Who else? Your Lady Poetry of course! Eloquent monologue Sylvie. Your poetic heart goes inspired from the very first word of penning this piece 10/10
well done very nice poem by great poet, wish you every success, Many thanks again
So flattered to know that you enjoyed the poem and apprceciated that. Thank you so much for your precious response. I am happy to know that you enjoyed this poem.My highest appreciations for your valuable visit, dear poet. God's Blessings.
Well written work, young lass... You tug at the heartstrings of The Reader as your poem bears somber passion quite incarnately. Solid structural movement throughout.
Your kindest comments, captive compliments and valuable responses do tug at my heart strings. I am tiuched very much, dear Frank! . God's Nlessings in Abundance!
Well written work, young lass... You tug at the heartstrings of The Reader as your poem bears somber passion quite incarnately. Solid structural movement throughout. I like it!
Thank you so much dear Frank, a response, a welcome compliment do my inner being move and I am very touched by yiour well meant words and lovely rendered words.I know yiou so well, and that makes this visit entirely different for me. Your sweet responses mean so much to me.Love it!
Deep inwardness becomes a chapter of a romance as you court the Muse for the warmth she can bring. In truth she is your heart of hearts.
THank you so much, dear Denis. I regard your visit highest and most precious.I like your response very much