So many years walking in this lifetime
Seeing the vile truth about my existence
For ages I stayed pure in my soul but yet…
Sheer sin and evil is my fate and my soul design
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What an outburst of dissastifaction, blaming the whole world for all the unbecoming of life.A very ponderous write CJ.
Compton bro....your words are a flame that burn with desire for life....very well composed, rich with thought and heart...the makings of a fine poet.....I knew inside when we first met here at PH....That you had the ability to become one of the finest young writers...and look at you now my brother....top of your game....I'm glad that we had that talk sometime ago....and that you paid attention to what we talked about...you're doing it with style....keep expressing 10
Confessions...a very hard thing to do sometimes...and it always takes some guts, which this piece is showing that you have. It's sad, but still good. And its real deep too. 10
A nicely executed modernistic poetic style with inner thoughts and emotions that are extraordinarily difficult to confess. Well written.
CJ, It's beautiful confession that gets rid of the sins. It's through these confessions that a poet unfolds everyday the new secrets of the unfathomable soul. Keep it up. CP
Your vivid revelation in this thought provoking write gives you away! and with what Jon London said (Who is one of my top writers and friend) about you, the very essence of Poetry has touched you! Keep inspiring the World with more! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...