A young poet died
Reason unknown, doctors bemused
Biologically, nothing was wrong
Heart was functioning properly
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Wonderful: silly humour is cheap and easy, but yours is 'dark grey', possibly downright 'black' humour, and this is more difficult to pull out succesfully.
Nicely envisioned and very humorously concluded Loved reading the poem
Thanks much AbdulRazak Bhai, I appreciate your comments they are equally good like your poems.
This is 'terrific'....... Lol! You are so very innovative and the treatment of the subject is unique! Enjoyed the phraseology of the autopsy report!
Your kind words motivated me to write few more humorous poems. Thanks much.
Well penned .The thread of thought unique.The last stanza is just superb.Thanks for sharing
So funny.. Laughing... What an idea! ! Wondering what his RIP read.
Well soon, I will be writing it for you, thanks for the idea, and thanks for reading my poem
Wonderful poem....Lol......made my day...Thanks for sharing such a nice poem..
Excellent write up. I admire your skills. Great humour from death.