Saturday, August 22, 2015

A Poet's Autopsy - Humorous Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

A young poet died
Reason unknown, doctors bemused
Biologically, nothing was wrong
Heart was functioning properly
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 15 January 2022

Excellent write up. I admire your skills. Great humour from death.

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Rod Mendieta 20 April 2017

Wonderful: silly humour is cheap and easy, but yours is 'dark grey', possibly downright 'black' humour, and this is more difficult to pull out succesfully.

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M Asim Nehal 04 October 2018

Thanks Much Rod, I am glad you liked it.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 06 September 2015

Nicely envisioned and very humorously concluded Loved reading the poem

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

Thanks much AbdulRazak Bhai, I appreciate your comments they are equally good like your poems.

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Valsa George 01 September 2015

This is 'terrific'....... Lol! You are so very innovative and the treatment of the subject is unique! Enjoyed the phraseology of the autopsy report!

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2015

Your kind words motivated me to write few more humorous poems. Thanks much.

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Jaishree Nair 22 August 2015

Well penned .The thread of thought unique.The last stanza is just superb.Thanks for sharing

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M Asim Nehal 02 September 2015

Thanks much, Glad u liked it.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 22 August 2015

So funny.. Laughing... What an idea! ! Wondering what his RIP read.

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M Asim Nehal 22 August 2015

Well soon, I will be writing it for you, thanks for the idea, and thanks for reading my poem

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T Rajan Evol 22 August 2015

Wonderful poem....Lol......made my day...Thanks for sharing such a nice poem..

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M. Asim Nehal

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