Saturday, November 8, 2008

A Poet Remembered Comments

Rating: 5.0

Too many were to mourn.The war
Had taken all the young, but left
Behind a few who stumbled, blind
Or lame, some, faring worse, bereft
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Fay Slimm
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Matt Starking 21 June 2016

nice write well read

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Since you wrote such a great tribute you made me want to find out about the man himself.. next up. research Owen. thank you

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Colin Jeffery 09 December 2008

A great tribute indeed. Owen was the greatest soldier poet of World War One. Brilliant work

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 December 2008

Words of tribute befitting a Master Wordsmith, who left behind his verses far too eoon. smooth structure....sterling imagework...Solid Work, as can always be expected from Fay Slimm work! FjR

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Martin Swords 29 November 2008

Fay.... Beautiful tribute to a wonderful Poet. The poetry of WW1 is very moving and poignant, I read it a lot. I often wonder about the changes that took place between WW1 and WW11, that there isn't a similar poetry tradition from WW11 See my....All The Boys.....and Verdun Return.... Also may I recommend a small poem by Edward Thomas....The Cherry Trees... Let me know Thanks Martin

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Ron Flowers 22 November 2008

A wonderful tribute and a grim reminder of the horrers of war and a 10 from me. Regards Ron

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Lynda Robson 17 November 2008

A wonderful poem Fay, a tribute not only to Wilfred Owen whose memory lives on in his words but all who fell in war, a very moving piece, 10 Lynda xx

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Sid John Gardner. 15 November 2008

An exceptional tribute not just to the war poet but to ALL who sacrifaced their lives for whatever in mans conflict with his brother.A profound moving and memorable piece Fay.Perhaps your writing should be displayed as an epitaph on each and every war memorial in our counter... Moved by your words, Sid x.

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Sandra Fowler 12 November 2008

Deeply touched, dear Fay. Wilfred Owen May have made the supreme sacrifice on that long ago November day, but he also gave the world imperishable poetry. By our words we live; by our words we survive. Exceptional write. Love. SandraX

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Kevin Wells 12 November 2008

Beautifully written, this is a piece that has captured the moment and the man, I think. Time is not a factor when it comes to this subject, though some would have us believe that it is. They say 'Oh that all happened so long ago...' Well...Pray God that it never happens again! Unfortunately, the human race never tires of seeking new ways to destroy itself and although we all wish an end to the abomination of war, in our hearts we know that there will always be madmen. Thanks for helping us to remember, Fay.

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Carl Harris 11 November 2008

This is a deeply moving poem, and a wonderful tribute to the poet Wilfred Owen, Fay. It is such a tragedy that he died within one week of the ending of the Great War. I have had the privilege to read many of the noted World War I poets, and besides our own Joyce Kilmer, I have read Robert Service and many others including Wilfred Owen. He was only twenty-five when he died, yet some others died even younger. Your very expressive poem is beautifully written and will hopefully cause some readers to look for his poetry and some of the poetry of the other famous Great War poets as well. Carl.

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Bob Blackwell 11 November 2008

Fay, WW1 was a terrible war which spawned more poets than other wars. Wilfred Owen was most probably the best known. I quote...from his Anthem for Doomed Youth..... 'Their flowers the tenderness of patient minds, And each slow dusk a drawing-down of blinds. The flowers no doubt were Poppies. 10/10 You caught his mood. Bob T

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 09 November 2008

It's a fine tribute to a poet, although I admit not one of my favurite poets, he died so close to the end of the war that was his muse... Andrew 10

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Rebel Heart 09 November 2008

A poignant tribute to an exceptional poet. Thank you for this one Fay. Glad I came across your page. j.

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Kris Smith 08 November 2008

Thankyou Fay one of my favourite poets 10 Chris

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Joseph Poewhit 08 November 2008

The war to end all wars

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Tom Balch 08 November 2008

The poet is vital in remembering history and the fallen, all of the Willie Mcbride, s. 10/10 Fay for this tribute to wilfred Owen. Regards Tom

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