A Poet Perturbed... Comments

It’s said [mostly in corporate and art sector] ‘Job Satisfaction’ makes one petrified and phlegmatic stagnant …here we find Sr. Poet’s dissatisfaction dictum… and used Love and Nature as symbols… Poet is very wise and subtly percolated out in readers’ mind the Vedic saying CHARYAIVATI… CHARYAIVATI… CHARYAIVATI… [March on and on and on…]…Excellent PH* in PH Thanks Sir an eye-opener for me… 10++ [HF]** Ms. Nivedita UK - *[Poetic Humility] **Heart Felt

as laughter silent the pen....the minds patiently hug some thought of witlessly roar of the heart....so beautiful your poem that allures me to go beyond the mind can achieve.....thank you and GOD bless you... a 10 +++++

Perturbed poets thwart words that are eager to seek their place among thoughts that have fathomed from within the depths of meaningful purpose.

good poem with rhythmic echoes of the Introduction from Songs of Innocence and Experience by William Blake...

i love the last line. you ended this piece perfectly.. Hugs, Meggie

Like throwing darts, you can't hit the bullseye every time.

i don't believe it may be they are lieing both of them..a very interesting poem...10

you need no consolation or assurance, lovely poem. no need to feel perturbed. how do I keep missing these gems, i fail to understand. I am enchanted by the smooth flow, and add it to my fav. list. 10+ Mamta

A perfect case of poet's block Kesav a fairly regular phenomenon - a lovely write and an apt title...

You have captured the feeling that anyone making an attempt to write might feel on any given day...It was lovely to read!

Writing is a constant search for the right words to express our feelings. We don't stop - ever as a poet. It opens up the world for us so it does get frustrating at times but at the same time it's a true gift. I can't imagine not doing it as I'm sure you cannot. Thank you for sharing your feelings that we can relate to! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

very powerful emotion, and i must say i've been there and done that A very good poem 10+

Don't worry Kesav..seven steps to success..on the steeple when you are (already you are) love of/for nature..nature of/for love all will surrender..no matter even if you are seventy or eighty..10+

i always do love your style and uniqueness of artistic writing...Hope you'll open your voting mail...Surely, you'll have your poems always on the top...TC

kve... Let your creative instincts..be.. un satiated throughout a life Span.. it's a cave’.. aesthetically carved..mysterious.. I am a little selfish...to wish u' so... u' remain a perturbed...poet.. to see more and more of your...poetic expressions.. unique..in style..lyrics..provoking.. regards.. sivan..

Amusing. Your phrasing reflects your mood. We are poets just having fun. Of course, our inspiration doesn's always see it that way.

Poets are normally highly sensitive! Naturally perturbed!

A natural ease in the expression; deceptive in the sense it subtly holds too! Fine poem!

This is very simple with ample poetic depth.Loving nature is essential to stimulate mind.A very good poem

Interesting concept and it works. I think you can write both nature and love. HG: -) xx