Tuesday, November 11, 2008

A Poet In Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

My mind reels with words of love, desire and passion
I try so desperately to grasp
lines and verses just something… to tell how I feel
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Patricia Gale
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Nimal Dunuhinga 20 December 2009

Poetry and love are like our two eyes...........let the words reel as it is then grasp firmly! You added some ingredients to this rare love.

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Rachel Butler 11 October 2009

They race around my heart through my soul leaving my mind dazed Rachel Ann Butler

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Ted M 19 August 2009

When you say those words the way you say it can make it so wonderful. Lovely Poetry this one..............

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Obed Souza 24 July 2009

Wonderful poem! Nice composition!

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~ Jon London ~ 24 January 2009

lovely expressionate piece of loving words of poetic loveliness.....well written...simply lovely Best of Health & Happiness Jon

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Ridge Cahill 25 November 2008

Love is a splendid thing, as is your poem.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 November 2008

An untraditionally succinct offering from the Pen of the Princess...but trust me all ye commentors to follow.....It is smooth, crisp quality, not quanity, that makes a poem efflorescent & poignant....and this poem serves as the paradigm for this claim...Sweet serve, lass! FjR

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Duncan Wyllie 15 November 2008

Some say it with a look, some with their words and some with both I feel that you would be the latter, Love duncan X

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 November 2008

Those three words are like 'life giver', given by God.Undisputed bliss! .Great writes Pat.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 November 2008

Oh! lovely poem on poet's love! .........10+

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 November 2008

A poet is not afraid to express his or her love, exploring the wonders of their love.. Andrew 10

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Michael Gale 11 November 2008

A simplistic approach is sometimes the most wanted and direct path to under standing ideas and ideals. Great poem. I had'da giv'vit a ten'ner, fer sure! God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

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Meggie Gultiano 11 November 2008

you are indeed the Poet in Love. Love this, my friend.Wonderful..

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Original Unknown Girl 11 November 2008

How wonderful. A poet in love will indeed find the words when they come out of the haze or even whilst during the haze. Power to your pen and cannot wait to see some passionate prose. HG: -) xx

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Kris Smith 11 November 2008

Patricia I am so happy for you he is a very lucky man to have such beauty in all forms in his arms Chris 10

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