"A Poet I Am, Says I, Says I" Comments

This has a real melody that blends in with the rhythm. Delightful to read and send's one on a merry, happy way.

This has a real melody that blends in with the rhythm. Delightful to read and send's one on a merry, happy way.

Firstly, i will like to comment on the lines number, the numbers of line in the first paragraph seems shorter than that of the second paragraph, while the last paragraph seems to be the shortest... but the words are carefully used. I am also a poet and write African poems, as well as English verses... Perhaps, you try and see some of Shelley's work, or Lord Tennyson. I will like to have a friendly chat with you one of these days.