Monday, September 11, 2017

A Poet - 08 Comments

Rating: 5.0

One day I met-

A sad looking poet
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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soumya 22 November 2017

Then I asked him- What a long life is? A stale plate of delicious food Cooked with love and served with care On pyre of a meaningless fire Like a mole in Cobra's mouth. Nice describtion. Thanks for shared 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thanks dear Soumya for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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D Priyanka Singh 15 November 2017

A stale plate of delicious food Cooked with love and served with care On pyre of a meaningless fire Like a mole in Cobra's mouth. Locvely poem shared.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thank you DP, Thanks dear for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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Rajendra Rout 12 September 2017

On pyre of a meaningless fire Like a mole in Cobra's mouth. Yes neither the snake can swallow nor vomit. 10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thanks Raj dear for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 12 September 2017

A day of release from Golden jail. Liked the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thanks dear Suratha for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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Anita Aparajita Das 11 September 2017

Then I asked him- What a long life is? A stale plate of delicious food Cooked with love and served with care On pyre of a meaningless fire Like a mole in Cobra's mouth. Neither the cobra can swallow nor can it spit. Nice concept. Thanks.10+++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thanks dear Neetu for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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