A Poet - 08 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

A Poet - 08

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One day I met-

A sad looking poet

Walking swift, very fast

Along the railway track.


I just moved ahead,

Just to talk to him,

As I peeped into his eyes,

He looked at me.


I just asked him-

What a flower is?

A dying soothing breeze

Supposed to carry at ease

The faint cry of a girl

On her bed of death.


Then I asked him-

What a baby girl is?

A foolish bubble on water

Dreaming to meet the ocean

Streaming down the hill

On a volcanic path.


Then I asked him-

What a long life is?

A stale plate of delicious food

Cooked with love and served with care

On pyre of a meaningless fire

Like a mole in Cobra's mouth.


And I asked him-

What a death, then is?

Railings of desire and walls of lust,

Locks of greed, wings glued,

Along the dark and heinous wrath,

Riding on the horse of egotist void

A day of release from Golden jail.

Monday, September 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: baby,death,desire,flower,girl,greed,human condition,life and death,lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
soumya 22 November 2017

Then I asked him- What a long life is? A stale plate of delicious food Cooked with love and served with care On pyre of a meaningless fire Like a mole in Cobra's mouth. Nice describtion. Thanks for shared 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thanks dear Soumya for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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D Priyanka Singh 15 November 2017

A stale plate of delicious food Cooked with love and served with care On pyre of a meaningless fire Like a mole in Cobra's mouth. Locvely poem shared.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thank you DP, Thanks dear for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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Rajendra Rout 12 September 2017

On pyre of a meaningless fire Like a mole in Cobra's mouth. Yes neither the snake can swallow nor vomit. 10++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thanks Raj dear for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 12 September 2017

A day of release from Golden jail. Liked the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thanks dear Suratha for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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Anita Aparajita Das 11 September 2017

Then I asked him- What a long life is? A stale plate of delicious food Cooked with love and served with care On pyre of a meaningless fire Like a mole in Cobra's mouth. Neither the cobra can swallow nor can it spit. Nice concept. Thanks.10+++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 November 2017

Thanks dear Neetu for so lovely remarks that inspire a lot.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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