Wednesday, July 25, 2007

A Poem To Pass The Time... Comments

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I feel stuck in this place
Drenched with things I shouldn’t lack
Can’t recognize the face
Nothing is what it should have been
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Audrey Stephenson
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Fred Babbin 04 February 2010

A truly beautiful poem. I wish I could say more.

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Sierra Monique 09 August 2007

Interesting poem. Nicley written.

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Michael Gale 01 August 2007

It is often natural when one is so young to be unsure and depressed. Often we need to stop and think what would make us happy. A direction in life does not always need to be haunted by thoughts of negativity and dark sad depressional bouts of insecurities. Just live life to the fullest and pray to God for guidance. Cheer up and look at the world around you with mostly the positive side of the coins life and not the bad things we endure in life. Be happy. Great poem. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Cecil Hickman 30 July 2007

a very well written poem it shows the feelings of being lost and worried about so many things along with not being sure of what to do about it or at the time, , , blessings...Cecil

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Audrey Stephenson

Audrey Stephenson

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