Monday, December 8, 2008

A Poem To My Shadow Comments

Rating: 2.4

Walk aside me my silhouette, for I am alone
Drown me in your tears, for I cease to feel
Blind me with your love for I saw too much
in his mock show of a life; I lost
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jathin aka jesuzz
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Autumn Stoddard 23 December 2008

What can I say that has nat yet been said by those before me? Breath taking.

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Chitra - 19 December 2008

well penned with lots of fine expressions and really emotional in quality

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Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2008

this poem written very well reads sad...the second stanza is really touching, ...i like the way you write, Jathin...very poetic...10

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