A Poem To Fan The Flames Of Heartache Comments
This haunts my sleep
It burns out smiles, assuaging nothing as it does so.
Feeding my depression and fanning the flames of my heartache.
Can't you tell me that everything will be alright?
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Yeah, really depicted one, who's sick cos his love is leaving him in despair, nice work,
this is such a great poem, u can feel the heartache
I always think about what you'll write next... And everytime I can relate to it... It was a great read, and I'd love to read more. But, I have to say, I've thought a lot about you lately... -Trysta
such a sad meaninful poem. had a major effect on meh. great write. ~Tori~
Your lay out is perfect and the poems very moving... the first person writing was great... I'm sorry you had your heart broken... I hate how it hurts... well rips a hole in your chest... don't you?
There's a lot of emotion here and you've expressed it so well. I love how you wrote it in first person. It adds to the powerful effect. I'm sorry for your lose. But it's a beautiful poem!
u have a strong, beautiful voice dont be afraid to tell people what you think
a good voice to your thoughts. isnt that wat poetry is? poetry paves the unseen road. it voices the ineffable...
wow this is a really good poem. It's sad when we love someone who doesn't love us back. Or when that person just doesn't love us anymore. This was beautifully written. I hope your heart heals.
touching. I also liked the line about the reflection of your eyes. beautiful imagery. on another note: YOU TOOK AWAY ALL OF YOUR OTHER POEMS.: ( i guess it's just time to start anew. also, could you post a translation of your bio cuz i'm really curious about what it says. and, what is clavespada? i tried translating your new name but the website didn't know what clavespada was. plz? for all us non-bilingual people? : P
'I see nothing Not the reflection of my dark eyes in yours'... beautiful line which says it all...great work
ouch, very good poem, heartache hurts terribly..and i know the feeling..~Eva
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7/23/2025 2:19:37 AM # 1.0.0
Very impressive! A powerful and moving write that clearly gives you away! I love the flow and rich imagery embedded on it! Even through pain we can find the courage to let it all out of our hearts and mind and this is a good example! I like it! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with more such thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...