I like a poem that hits you
Like a karate chop in the face
Short and sharp and straight and true
That knocks you out of place
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nice rational poem about poems, very well written............10+++
As a former holder of brown belt in the art...I would agree with you. Short, sharp chops are effective, but not to the face...an elbow or a kick is much more deadly. I prefer a gentler form these days. Going with the flow of Tai Chi gives my mind, body and soul's muse, all the inspiration it needs. smiling at you Tai,
my kind of poems too....!