Thursday, August 27, 2009

A Poem That Hits You Like A Karate Chop In The Face Comments

Rating: 3.2

I like a poem that hits you
Like a karate chop in the face
Short and sharp and straight and true
That knocks you out of place
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Jack Williams
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Sonya Florentino 01 November 2009

my kind of poems too....!

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David Scott 16 October 2009

Hiya! Boom! Pow! I like karate poems too.

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Marieta Maglas 16 October 2009

nice rational poem about poems, very well written............10+++

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Tai Chi Italy 03 October 2009

As a former holder of brown belt in the art...I would agree with you. Short, sharp chops are effective, but not to the face...an elbow or a kick is much more deadly. I prefer a gentler form these days. Going with the flow of Tai Chi gives my mind, body and soul's muse, all the inspiration it needs. smiling at you Tai,

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