Friday, June 26, 2009

# # A Poem - Senryu Comments

Rating: 5.0

a package of words
wrapped around a thought in it
disappears when read
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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rago rago 10 July 2009

cute brief and meaning lingers ever..........

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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

they bring pleasure to our heart to Mister Sam

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Indira Renganathan 29 June 2009

words disappear thought lingers....sometimes a good wording also lingers....inelligent craft

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Joseph Poewhit 29 June 2009

A precise thought of wisdom

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Extremely philosophical Samanyan and great writing as usual! 10 Karin Anderson

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Smiley Hooker 28 June 2009

Your package of words is always full of sensible thoughts, Sam. Short, simple and brilliant! : -)

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Rajaram Ramachandran 27 June 2009

Any noteworthy good package of words, wrapped around a thought in it, remain in one's heart when read, what I feel.

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Louis Rams 27 June 2009

very good for a three liner.

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nicely put. i like it.

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Ency Bearis 27 June 2009

such a package deal of words...some are kept some are forgotten...meaningful write....10

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Pandian Angelina 27 June 2009

Thanks for the packages of words you give But, the taste of your thoughts They enter the blood and reach the brain Ah! they linger still as fragrant memories Always in our heart! A beautiful poem on Poem! Angel

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Catrina Heart 27 June 2009

Each and one of us has its own interpretation to some allegorical poems... wrapped with finest imagery and profoundness! NIce work!

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Priyanka Bhowmick 27 June 2009

amazing senryu..very well defined a poem in a short msg, , , ! !

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Ramesh T A 26 June 2009

Standard technical poem to read!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

Marvelous write

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Carol Gall 26 June 2009

nice i like this......

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Sandra Martyres 26 June 2009

Very interesting write Samanyan...

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~ Jon London ~ 26 June 2009

nicely done Sam....short...but it contains the gift, of share

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