Monday, May 22, 2006

A Poem...Perhaps Comments

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I'd like to write a simple poem
And try to make it rhyme
But as the hours are flying by
I just can't find the time
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Joan Paterson
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Kee Thampi 14 September 2006

we want to a sleep but slipping to a dawn dreams Perhaps I'll wite about my dogs And places where we walk But I think they think they'd do better If only they could talk nice rhythmic verse of a tipsy good write,

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David Darbyshire 22 May 2006

Good flow Joan, and nice ryhm's, so I am sure you did it well, about dog's talking back thats another poem darling have fun dave xxx

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