Monday, July 14, 2008

A Poem On My Wrist Comments

Rating: 4.1

I wrote a poem today,
I wrote it on my wrist,
I wrote it with a razor,
It ended in a twist.
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Bree Swart
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Silence Dogood 25 September 2008

Sad but well written reminds me of my poems both about similar things.

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Bill Thomas 16 July 2008

You sum it up brilliantly, Bree: not a word surplus or out of place. Do write more, please - & look after yourself too.

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Viola Grey 15 July 2008

I quite like how different this is to other razor poems...short, but straight to the point...great work

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Gone with the wind 14 July 2008

Poetry, life and death never inform while entering or leaving...The blade really is very sharp and narrow..the pang of pain is iresistible..I really like this poem..small, written in simple words but the meaning conveyed is appealing to the heart..I never felt like this before reading a verse..Here you have shown the true ability of a poet..the last stanza is beautifully pictured....a deserved and hearty ten...Take care. Gul

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