Friday, September 29, 2006

A Poem Of Rhymes Comments

Rating: 4.2

I must take care about the food I take;
I must avoid the smoke whenev’r I bake;
I must avoid dust rising when I rake!
I must be cautious of the wealth I make;
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Dr John Celes
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

that's fascinating and lovely

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Marvin Brato 10 October 2007

A very good lessons in poetry that rhyme... pls write one in ACROSTIC. Liked it, top mark.

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Raul Castelan 23 June 2007

The rhyming, the words, the all too true. The way you went about too was all so good to read and to remember. Just makes me wonder what else have I missed of your poetry.

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Elysabeth Faslund 20 April 2007

A tad bit 'forced' in the rhyme department, but that's only a Westeners viewpoint. India is very beautiful...I have a publisher in Cuttack, Orissa. He has described very much to me...a very kind man...Jayanta Mahapatra.

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Malini Kadir 09 April 2007

Worldly caution in rhymes way.... quiet nice i say......

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Risha : Ahmed 25 March 2007

A beautiful flowing poem and nice rhyme.

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Dr John Celes

Dr John Celes

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