I must take care about the food I take;
I must avoid the smoke whenev’r I bake;
I must avoid dust rising when I rake!
I must be cautious of the wealth I make;
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A very good lessons in poetry that rhyme... pls write one in ACROSTIC. Liked it, top mark.
The rhyming, the words, the all too true. The way you went about too was all so good to read and to remember. Just makes me wonder what else have I missed of your poetry.
A tad bit 'forced' in the rhyme department, but that's only a Westeners viewpoint. India is very beautiful...I have a publisher in Cuttack, Orissa. He has described very much to me...a very kind man...Jayanta Mahapatra.
that's fascinating and lovely