(a Poem Of My Island) 2- The Man With No Life Comments

This poem is well crafted - good use of rhyme and rhythm - and it also conveys a poignant message. A good read! Welcome to PH and thank you for inviting me to read your works - it's been a pleasure. S :)

i like this tim has a nice theme

thanks alot -that was a now tobegin with it was a type 'o' - thanks for pointing that out

This is a good poem. it has a pleasant resonance. Your thought is carried through and summed up nicely. I might suggest one change in the last line of the second verse. Instead of 'No', how about 'Now'. Adeline