Monday, April 4, 2011

' A Poem Of Love On A Spring Morning ' Comments

Rating: 2.7

When my eyes

For the first time
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indira babbellapati
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Josh Alfred 21 January 2022

The growing and cracking seed of form, represent as one's love, is a remarkable metaphor. I greatly enjoyed this piece. You have serious talent.

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Bharati Nayak 11 October 2019

No more will people call me mad As when I went about Sketching in the thin air My blunt fingers trying in vain To give you a form How I wish This mortal skin was all eyes! - - - - - - - - - -Wow- - -How to paint the ethereal feelings of love? An exquisitely beautiful poem.

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Chinedu Dike 12 November 2014

A Thing Of Beauty Is A Joy Forever - John Keats. A nice romantic poem written in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Aasiq the poet 15 November 2013

the spring time morning is many things too many people..for the lovelorn the cool morning breeze ignites the inside...great poem indira..thanks...

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Anil Kumar 15 April 2011

Details are extremely informative.... But the line...'This Mortal skin was all eyes.' is beautiful....

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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