Words drum a rising tempo
synchronized, a million neurons
Pulsate, abuzz like a beehive disturbed
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A wonderful choice of words and their soft music coupled with an imagery coming right from the heart of nature make this amazing poem a pleasure to read. Thanks. A quote: Pulsate, abuzz like a beehive disturbed.... announces an incoming tsunami - a poem is born.
thank you, amazing how words can be strung together to create pictures
This is a wonderful write Seema! As Rajnish sir has said, the right choice of words has made it a poem of pleasurable read! A 10
Thank you M'am...am stilling grappling with the technicalities of Haiku..