Tuesday, May 31, 2022

A Poem, Free Of Nicotine! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Small Blonde leaves,
Wrapped in a paper roll,
Smoking, is injurious,
Choking de entire soul.
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Raj Kashyap
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Chinedu Dike 01 June 2022

A sad truth vividly worded with conviction. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched...

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Raj Kashyap 01 June 2022

Thanks buddy it Means a lot ❤️

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Richard Wlodarski 31 May 2022

And Alfred Barna has picked up your beat as well. See, you already have fans! Go for it! ! !

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Raj Kashyap 01 June 2022

Thank you so much buddy ❤️ actually thanks a bunch 🌸😊 appreciation from such beautiful soul is my booster to write such more poems likes this ❤️

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Richard Wlodarski 31 May 2022

Raj, a very informative and excellent poem song! Call me crazy. But this is definitely a great rap song! In all sincerity, do something with this poem song! It's very clear to the reader how passionate you are about this issue. Go for it!

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Raj Kashyap 01 June 2022

Thank you So much Richard ❤️.... It definitely Means a lot ❤️ well yes smoking is a temporary fun but a long lasting lesson 😨... If you time do read my other poems too ❤️

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Sandra Feldman 31 May 2022

Very well written, complete and helpful.Your poem should be included in and with each cigarette pack

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Raj Kashyap 01 June 2022

Thank you so Much Sandra... This one really made my day.... I don't know what to speak now... I'm already in tears now 😭... Thank you so much for the support ❤️... If you have time do read my other poems too ❤️

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Alfred Barna 31 May 2022

Indeed, addiction and death, the siren sings a song, where the taste, the sounds, and the senses lead you along....ending up on the rocks always, once reality bump your head onto them. Suddenly, the taste is not so sweet, and you wonder How?

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Raj Kashyap 01 June 2022

Yeah you penned it true Alfred ❤️... Cigarette is a temporary fun but a long lasting lesson 💔💔 if you have time do read my other poems too ❤️

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