Saturday, January 17, 2009

*** A Poem For You *** Comments

Rating: 4.4

The distance, laden with terminal disease
Counting the days to eternal abyss

Fragile, a vein ruptures
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Ruby Mostazir 15 June 2015

Jst love it......

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Romeo Della Valle 14 March 2010

Excellency shown here, your great artistic talent has been proven here, one more time...'WISDOM is not a privilege but a GIFT given to us by our creator to be share with the rest of the world...Thanks for sharing...10++++

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Anand Madhukar 18 September 2009

Lavish imagery makes this write opulent.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 27 July 2009

It is very beautiful poem, subtle and good. I like it very much. Thanx. (10v.) Greetings. Maria Barbara Korynt

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Shawn Greyling 30 April 2009

Yuo have a gift my friend, to take words, put them together and paint a story is a gift that owns more value than gold. 10/10!

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Rayjean Carter 07 April 2009

this is an awesome poem. good job

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Latarshia Brown 02 March 2009

I love it and it was a creative poem

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Chhavi Anupam 13 February 2009

Cute poem, enjoyed. Chhavi Anupam

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 04 February 2009

u leave me speechless after every single poem i read of urs! ! ! ur amazing! ! ! !

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Rage Allay 02 February 2009

This is excellent. Perfect rhymes, Beautiful flow. Very candid. This is one of my best.

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Little Morning Star 29 January 2009

this poem is really beautiful.. very well penned..

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Samweli Butobi 28 January 2009

absolutly beautiful got 10

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Julia Queen 23 January 2009

I LIKE IT! It's very deep. Very wonderful. And very awesome!

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Muflih N 23 January 2009

Great work. I feel the loonging for seeing somebody.

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Lets count the days to eternal life of peace and love! Great work.

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Pampero Jadan 22 January 2009

pretty poem shows the burning of love the far love nice similes i loved this'Desire so beautiful, like a poppy' good for u good choose of word beautifully rhymed

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Shabre Moore 22 January 2009

it has meaning if u take the time to read ti an i did i like it really

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 22 January 2009

just like the song itself, brother! ! ! simple and create sensuous nuance! ! ! keep writing! ! !

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June Smithster 22 January 2009

he who wants faraway love must learn to walk on water first CROOOOOOOOOON on ANDY WIlliam(s)

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Symone Neal 22 January 2009

i loved the flow of the poem it was like soothing. keep me posted on your writing i'll love to read more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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