Somewhere here
can, I smell
strongly, its presence
at a distance of
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Rather too long, yet was a pleasure to read since it speaks of love of a father for his daughter. Congratulations on the poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
Thanks for congratulations.I am grateful that you have given your precious time to read and give such a lovely comment. Regards.
Coach! ! Closest approach or within. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I feel the quest of a child in this poem. The child goes on searching something in every common sight but the poet is not able to fix it. Thanks
Thanks dear poet for you loved the poem and gave your precious time and energy for reading and giving such nice comments. Regards
A beautiful poem, congratulations on poem of the day Binaya
Thanks dear poet for your kind words and inspiration. Regards.
A beautiful poem indeed. Emotion spilling like nectar from heart for the lovely daughter. Congrats.
Thanks dear for your support inspiration and love.I am indebted.
There is the constant occurrence of the sense of smell and fragrance in the poem, which refers to the special scent or fragrance of your own child. .
But, your quest is elsewhere MAA! .........most touching. It is really a beautiful poem on mother. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
Thanks repected sir for your love and inspiration.I loved your kind words. Regards.
I recognized this poem immediately - - An amazing write- -'MAA' is an address for mother, but a daughter is also addressed 'MAA' lovingly. Congratulations for being selected as the 'Poet of the Day '
Thanks dear MAM for constantly being the sources of inspiration.Again I thank for your loving words and wishes.
I was thinking of not reading any poems but this magnificent piece of work dragged me to revisit it! Keep the good work on dear Binay! Many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!
Thanks Sir for your comment.It is your inspiration that helped me to be here in poem hunter.I am obliged to you and other poets and readers for their great love for my existence.I am thankful to PH that my poem is selected as one member poem of the day.Best regards.
Very lovely poem pure emotion... congratulation...dear poet...
Thanks dear poet for your loving wishes and sharing my emotion. Regards.
excellent compassionate expression through poetic verse- SORRY MAA! I don't have a compass or road map to your quest. ///// beautiful poem on the family relation which is configured naturally (divinely, cause nature is divine to me)
Thanks dear poet wasting precious time and energy for reading and giving such lovely comments on my poem. Regards.
Your quest is in the distance of telescope or resolution of microscope, your quest is elsewhere. Somewhere here can I, smell strongly, its presence.- - -The quest both inward and outward- - that is part of a growing daughter- - -father can feel and sense the emotions of the daughter, but he has no road map or compass to help her. She has to find it herself by her own toil and experience. A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.
But, SORRY MAA! I don't have a compass or road map to your ques.it was a lovely line.sir i enjoy your poem
A lovely write, a wonderful share that not only carry a good story, flowy lines, meaning...it has a pure feeling and expression all over the write. This is a write
Thanks dear poet for lovely comments and for your love and inspiration.Sorry for reciprocating lately.Regards.
A lovely poem loaded with significant images..I loved it..10
Thanks dear sir for nice comment.I loved it.please keep encouraging me sir.I invite you to read and connent on my new poem I plunge into the cup of tea.. Regards Binaya
What a beautiful poem Binaya. A wonderful poem of the day.
Thanks dear poet for such a great comment.I am grateful. Regards