A Poem For My Father Comments
Father dying so I could be free
Pain endured through war and misery
Tears overflowing we embrace in the dance of life
Contemplating the inequity of his life of strife
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A Very Beautiful Heart Felt Sentimental Poem! ! ! ! ! With Wisdom And Love Shown! ! ! ! ! Very Powerful! ! ! ! ! Excellent! ! ! ! ! Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ Thank You So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! !
Rebecca, your enthusiasm is contagious! You've made my day! Thanks for such a great response! And for the many 10S! ! ! ! !
Thank you for feeling that way, Bernard. And for the 10. Much appreciated!
Fathers have an important role in raising children, they are the role models. Well written
So true, Rini. Thanks for reading and commenting. And the 10. Greatly appreciated.
Loaded with laudable lessons. Well done my frien!
Thank you so much, Howard. Great feedback from you which means a lot to me because he did teach me a lot. Thanks for being the 1st to read this poem, and for that mighty 10.
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7/21/2025 9:43:15 AM # 1.0.0
The concluding two lines of the poem say it all about your father and about you battling adversities in life. This is indeed a masterpiece and very emotional at that. Thank you very much. Contemplating the inequity of his life of strife Living in the desperation of time and space Forever searching for freedom...without a trace
Rajnish, thank so very much for your insights and for thinking that it's a masterpiece. I am humbled and honoured.