Sunday, June 11, 2006

A Poem For My Boyfriend Geoff`s Birthday! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today you add one more year
One more candle upon the cake
Another year came and gone
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Tracey Collins
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James Tyler 27 September 2006

Wonderful poem, Good job with transferring the emotions into words. I agree with David, the aging wine line is spectacular

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David Gerardino 16 September 2006

A fine wine aging for the taste, great line, makes the poem...............

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Duncan Wyllie 13 June 2006

A wonderful poem for a true love, and if it has had the help from Patricia, well then, that makes it all the better Love Duncan X

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Dee Daffodil 11 June 2006

Tracey, What a lovely poem you've written for Geoff. Truly a beautiful piece...skillfully written! Hugs, Dee

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Patricia Gale 11 June 2006

Tracey your heart does show for this lad. I hope he knows how he has been shined upon with this jesture from your heart. Patricia

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Tracey Collins

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