Today you add one more year
One more candle upon the cake
Another year came and gone
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A fine wine aging for the taste, great line, makes the poem...............
A wonderful poem for a true love, and if it has had the help from Patricia, well then, that makes it all the better Love Duncan X
Tracey, What a lovely poem you've written for Geoff. Truly a beautiful piece...skillfully written! Hugs, Dee
Tracey your heart does show for this lad. I hope he knows how he has been shined upon with this jesture from your heart. Patricia
Wonderful poem, Good job with transferring the emotions into words. I agree with David, the aging wine line is spectacular