Monday, July 4, 2016

A Poem For Marie-J Comments

Rating: 5.0

All the scientists, poets and philosophers fail
There is no rhyme or reason
No sonnet sweet, or Shakespeare's tale
No spells or charms to believe in
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Edmund Strolis
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Nosheen Irfan 10 July 2016

A beautiful concept delineated in an enchanting way. I would like to quote my most favorite lines from the poem. Yesterday's thorns guard the rose.... The clock strikes thirteen an impossible hour... A million blades on a ghost of a flower. Full of wisdom. Great write. Full marks!

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Sarah Persson 04 July 2016

See the hearts broken and there lies the proof Yesterday's thorns guard the rose Truly beautiful. A wish for love and a gentle touch A beacon to guide her when the clouds roll her way Never too little or ever too much. A perfect 10++

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