I can smell the
Nice scent, of a
Freshly cut grass.
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this poem tells how a man should love his woman. i like the wording and the feelings expressed, ay` mmfwethu this poem is good, in fact most of yours that I've read. cha uloba ezingeni nsizwa
i promise not to live your life 4 you, but just to support and Guide you wooew #ndithule
So loving heart is yours.Tenderness and affection, love and liability all are intermingled stupendously.Great Siya!
I really love this poem. Such endearing words that can really melt the heart into a pool of water. A love so tried and true could only belong to someone like you. I enjoyed this lovely rendition of love. A good write.
just loved reading it.. Beautiful poem with beautiful words :)
The greatness of your pen, never stops to marvell bra Siya, such words and such beautiful lines continue to reveal to the audience, just how magnificents, i love the last iStanza, ... Perfect! The_African_Son
WOooow Siya you showing your loving side so boldly here...hmmm that was enough flavor, and spices...you strike the heart of many readers again! _Unwritten Soul
Wow Siya, I loved the poem... Lovely poem and a wonderful end.... Support and guide very important to grow... Lovely poem, your girl is lucky(Amen) . God Bless You both(Amen) .
Great poem, my brother...... The warmth of those tiny hands... The warmth of those tiny lips.... The warmth of that melodic voice..... That warm smile my love.. Excellent writing! ! ! ! ! top marks! !
true lover was never expressed so magnificently like you do in this beautiful masterpiece.I wouldn't mind if you were to ask to marry my sister! Great piece of work.I salute you.
Beautiful, Siya! Such care in your words - A stunning, heartfelt poem!
The warmth of those tiny lips...., I know the feeling and its like it should be like that forever. Very romantic ka khoeli eena ya baratani Ntate.
A tender loving care. So passionate and lovely. Beautiful poem from the inner heart. Perfect and rated 10. Please rate and comment on my poems Thank you very much