Wednesday, February 1, 2012

A Poem For Her! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can smell the
Nice scent, of a
Freshly cut grass.
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo
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Captain Herbert Poetry 29 April 2014

A tender loving care. So passionate and lovely. Beautiful poem from the inner heart. Perfect and rated 10. Please rate and comment on my poems Thank you very much

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Lindo Mvelase 30 July 2013

this poem tells how a man should love his woman. i like the wording and the feelings expressed, ay` mmfwethu this poem is good, in fact most of yours that I've read. cha uloba ezingeni nsizwa

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Zandile Zoya 30 July 2013

i promise not to live your life 4 you, but just to support and Guide you wooew #ndithule

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Neela Nath Das 06 June 2013

So loving heart is yours.Tenderness and affection, love and liability all are intermingled stupendously.Great Siya!

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Patricia Grantham 03 June 2013

I really love this poem. Such endearing words that can really melt the heart into a pool of water. A love so tried and true could only belong to someone like you. I enjoyed this lovely rendition of love. A good write.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 June 2013

Depth of love tenderly expressed. Nice poem.

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Ofentse Mercy Hajane 08 April 2013

Whoaw! ! ! A pure plathora of art... :)

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Ruwanal Liyanage 14 November 2012

heart felt poem. keep up the good work.

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Sahil Sood 11 November 2012

just loved reading it.. Beautiful poem with beautiful words :)

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The greatness of your pen, never stops to marvell bra Siya, such words and such beautiful lines continue to reveal to the audience, just how magnificents, i love the last iStanza, ... Perfect! The_African_Son

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Anita Sehgal 12 October 2012

such a beautiful thought... touching...

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Neela Nath Das 01 July 2012

Heart warming poem.Very nice Siya.Loved it.

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Lusekelo Simwela 16 March 2012

nice writing.....beautiful poem

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Marvin Brato 09 February 2012

Indeed, this is a remarkable poem; honorable love!

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Unwritten Soul 07 February 2012

WOooow Siya you showing your loving side so boldly here...hmmm that was enough flavor, and spices...you strike the heart of many readers again! _Unwritten Soul

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Jinal Oswal 06 February 2012

Wow Siya, I loved the poem... Lovely poem and a wonderful end.... Support and guide very important to grow... Lovely poem, your girl is lucky(Amen) . God Bless You both(Amen) .

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Vipins Puthooran 03 February 2012

Great poem, my brother...... The warmth of those tiny hands... The warmth of those tiny lips.... The warmth of that melodic voice..... That warm smile my love.. Excellent writing! ! ! ! ! top marks! !

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Pheko Motaung 03 February 2012

true lover was never expressed so magnificently like you do in this beautiful masterpiece.I wouldn't mind if you were to ask to marry my sister! Great piece of work.I salute you.

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Silentpoet Grl 02 February 2012

Beautiful, Siya! Such care in your words - A stunning, heartfelt poem!

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Young Church Poetry 02 February 2012

The warmth of those tiny lips...., I know the feeling and its like it should be like that forever. Very romantic ka khoeli eena ya baratani Ntate.

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