A Poem For Carol Comments

Of course the poem matters as it brings with it romance into the relationship. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

A tragedy summed up in three lines - - I wonder sometimes in dark the still of night If I had read you the poem would it have mattered The regret of having understood the joy of fulfilling the small petty requests of a loved one, which at the moment feels quite absurd, but after they leave our hand, it fills the heart with an inexplicable heaviness....indeed touching! ! ! ! |

A tragedy summed up in three lines I wonder sometimes in dark the still of night If I had read you the poem would it have mattered The regret of having understood the joy of fulfilling the small petty requests of a loved one, which at the moment feels quite absurd, but after they leave our hand, it fills the heart with an inexplicable heaviness....indeed touching! ! ! !

loved the ending question. It is somewhat of a universal question Lovely

I like the rhythm of how this reads and its “dreamy” feel. The rhymes work out nicely and lend a light refrain.

What more can I say? Very touching and beautifully written.

A very touching poem James, beautifully written. Best wishes, Andrew

regrets felt upon the death of any being is the surest testimony of our being morally alive and them having been tender gentle souls.....you have tendered such an amazing eulogy

God bless all those I have wittingly or unwittingly harmed... what a beautiful poem

Very tragic....I could feel the pain. sathya narayana

This is a special quality poem. So, I gave it a 10. GW62