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A Poem For Baharak Comments

Rating: 5.0

February 4,2020

Which of your poems
shall I memorize first?
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Daniel Brick
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Soran M. H 13 May 2020

Your heart and my poem will blend over time into one life force.

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Soran M. H 13 May 2020

Which poem should I place near my heart, so that heart and poem share the same rhythm

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Soran M. H 13 May 2020

part1: The poet’s experience has mixed within the pure world of poetry that made him sensitive and delicate, so we can see him how his soul and flesh has mingled into a good and beautiful poem.

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Soran M. H 13 May 2020

part2: Through it, he expresses his inner feelings and thoughts. so we can read him very well in the best ideal world, Well done our knowledgeable and talented poet, waiting for more. For the reader's information: Baharak is a name for woman in Farsi and the name for a region in Afghanistan as well, it may have other meaning to the poet....10/10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 May 2020

Heart and poem share same rhythm when the friendship is very deep and poetry has flown from tender and kind mind. If such a great poem is penned from inner light then it is definitely adored by all. It is memorized by true heart and soul. An excellent poem is very well penned...10

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