Wednesday, August 26, 2009

A Poem About A Suicide Note Comments

Rating: 2.8

A soggy bit of paper
They found it in the bin
I said, It was a just caper
But they said it was a sin
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Jack Williams
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Sharon 04 April 2020

No family no friends I was a complete unknown .rumors are never true

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Sharon 04 April 2020

My first outing in the hospital book hoodie pills to kill me when I realized I had no place to go

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Sharon 04 April 2020

2008 if I’m not mistaken for myself I was abandoned by my family at the brink of my death bed

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Rosalita Fernandez 19 March 2010

dark but very good! nicely done

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Kassiah Gervaise 16 November 2009

dark, beautiful, it was a truely truely great poem.

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Mark R Slaughter 05 November 2009

A teaser in the letter. Nice piece Jack and thanks for your recent comments. PS yes claggy is in the dictionary - sorry, it isn't a word I made up! Regards Mark

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Angel OfGod 22 October 2009

Sinister....I like it.

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