leave me not my pen, go and stay with me
my immortal dream persuade you to looks
at me, dragging every inch of an ink fuse
in my nervously happy feeling, eludes the fear
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an absolutely true title and the poem substantiates the feeling...lovely
A comment a day keeps poet happy..............Good Wite...................
u r so right! this shud b added in the bible =) nice one -mel
A very descriptive and passionate poem of the beautiful art we all share here. You weave your words magically from beginning to end. A 10 from me
Truely well said my friend, those who have the passion of writing expressing their minds and their hearts in a poem make them feel glorious and light..........10
about your poem title...it's really that way...you have vented out the true feelings of a poet in good verse...thanks 10
oh! my pen, behold you have fold me, to know more than I know, you have bridge me to foresee what every soul has to believe, you have tangle my emotion to write every poise of what is being seen and true, now that you have made and make of what I am today, live with me and be with me until then........I depart…… Verily, a great passion, a passion of a poet in you.....10 I invite you to read my poems