Friday, January 27, 2012

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The dip in your ocean of ephemeral
Sent a gush of cold down my spine
Bump, bump bump, went this heart of small
This stillness has had you intertwined.
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Janine Alyssa Navarro
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Kevin Patrick 10 February 2012

Your imagery is amazing, I love how every line flows into one another with perfect symmetry. This closing line is your best. Bravo

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Janine Alyssa Navarro

Janine Alyssa Navarro

Dubai, U.A.E.
Janine Alyssa Navarro
Janine Alyssa Navarro
Dubai, U.A.E.
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