A Poem Comments

dear nikunj.....you have brought out the beauty of the nature in a poem.flow is smooth like a rivulet, meandering in the greens of nature.lovely write goes straight to my favourites..best wishes. ritty

beautiful Nikunj! poetry is everywhere and everything is song....

not just these, everything tangible intangible has poetry concealed provided one has a poetic heart...i loved reading these lines. the great telugu poet srisri writes-nothing is undeserving of poetry including a puppy, a cake of soap, and a match stick!

The poet becomes natures voice.....if he listens she will whisper, if he seeks she will disclose, if he loves she will bestow.....wonderful write! ! ! ! ! !

I like the flow of your poem and the idea within it, that any moment or place can become a poem in the hands and head of a poet-nice! ~Christine

a description in rhyme echoing the soul of writing a poetry on anything...Winnie

Your words put together are very well chosen. You form out a nice write and use good choices of thought. Making for a most interesting read! Love it, love it, love it! DC

A beautiful write, lovely imagery and well chosen words all brought together to an ending which stays with the reader.

This poem flows like the rolling river you write about as it stretches each image out with skill and finesse. You have captured the essence of poetry so beautifully here. Well done! 10 Love Karin

Yes dear Nikunj, poetry lies hidden in both Nature and in things that surrounds us! The poet's keen observation gives it expression through the emotive power of his words! Only this morning I was reading my old notes on the subject of Poetry! 10! -Raj Nandy

Yes poems [vocabulary] are found in everthing from sight and sound which your poem is based its the poet who can present it poeticaly which you have well done regards

You have describe wonderfully the art of poetry. Like paintinf ooetry requres observation as much as it needs inspiration.10+++

In smiling flowers and buzzing bees One can find a poem, nothing less. Very poetic poem Niks. People with poetic sense read poems about anything they sense with their 6th sense! 8/9/09

this is nice dear niks..in the heart of a poet, there you find a very nice poem...

despite repeatation of 'in' this a beautiful poem! All together excellent! 10+

Wonderful...there are lot more poetical...you can add later on....thanks for this awesome piece

Beautiful. I love this poem