Sunday, June 21, 2009

'A Poem' Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've lost my path so many times
And fell down to the ground
I've been the queen of fools
And was trapped by the weakness' sound
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Pink Butterfly
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Hans Vr 22 March 2012

Beautiful touching poem.

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Azul Noir 28 July 2010

A beautiful way to give thanks.

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Kristoffer Randolf Ramos 08 April 2010

Amazingly beautiful poem, I love it

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Marvin Brato 17 February 2010

Romantic and amazing passionate piece! Thanks for sharing.

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Iron Panda 23™ 27 January 2010

this is beautiful! ! i felt at peace as i read it :)

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Louis Rams 14 January 2010

very beautifully written, and the praise and acknowledgement to our lord is something that we share.

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Javier Zamorano 14 December 2009

thank you for reminding me the beautiful friend i have in jesus. its an honer to praise him with our heart and you pieced together a piece of art that i am sure jesus smiles for. thank you.

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Eyan Desir 15 September 2009

Nice and comforting..10s

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 September 2009

'You embraced me so warmly That my soul can barely feel With your tender loving care My heart has come to heal' Beautiful write. Well expressed poem I like it very much Great

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Marieta Maglas 22 August 2009

well expresed poem, excellent written....10

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Frank Lambert 15 August 2009

H Pink Butterfly, Thought I'd dropp by after the kind review you gave me. I'm glad I did, I could see you were a caring one before and now I can Kinda see why. Cheers, Frank

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Shirley Woods 04 August 2009

Very simply but beautifully expressed. Thanks

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Ted M 03 August 2009

Lovely poem with great flow, excellent rhythm........10+++

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C. P. Sharma 01 August 2009

Great healing power of faith and trust. I loved these lines in His praise, You embraced me so warmly That my soul can barely feel With your tender loving care My heart has come to heal CP

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Subroto Chatterjee 01 August 2009

Pink or yellow...with age thou shalt mellow....with love ye shall rise to glory....which you have in your story...So... Cheers. Subroto

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Wesley Mincin 23 July 2009

I admire your faith in God and think it was sweet that you wrote a poem about it. Because of the strength you must garner from your faith, it has been reflected onto this poem and it is because of the strength that is in this poem, that i give you a 10. Good work, butterfly.

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Saadat Tahir 16 July 2009

inspiring and fervent great poetry cheers

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Paul Butters 10 July 2009

Talk about titles.... A well crafted poem, almost a hymn. Cheers. Paul.

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Priyanka Bhowmick 10 July 2009

wonderful expressions of feelings... well penned.

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Wyndon Villafuerte 05 July 2009

Wow! Absolutely beautiful and well-written!

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