I've lost my path so many times
And fell down to the ground
I've been the queen of fools
And was trapped by the weakness' sound
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very beautifully written, and the praise and acknowledgement to our lord is something that we share.
thank you for reminding me the beautiful friend i have in jesus. its an honer to praise him with our heart and you pieced together a piece of art that i am sure jesus smiles for. thank you.
'You embraced me so warmly That my soul can barely feel With your tender loving care My heart has come to heal' Beautiful write. Well expressed poem I like it very much Great
H Pink Butterfly, Thought I'd dropp by after the kind review you gave me. I'm glad I did, I could see you were a caring one before and now I can Kinda see why. Cheers, Frank
Great healing power of faith and trust. I loved these lines in His praise, You embraced me so warmly That my soul can barely feel With your tender loving care My heart has come to heal CP
Pink or yellow...with age thou shalt mellow....with love ye shall rise to glory....which you have in your story...So... Cheers. Subroto
I admire your faith in God and think it was sweet that you wrote a poem about it. Because of the strength you must garner from your faith, it has been reflected onto this poem and it is because of the strength that is in this poem, that i give you a 10. Good work, butterfly.
Talk about titles.... A well crafted poem, almost a hymn. Cheers. Paul.
Beautiful touching poem.