Wednesday, December 5, 2018

A Poem Comments

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We are ruled by a king who won this earth
After many star-wars in the battlefields of space.
Among the stars and planets earth looks like a poem
With a lovely grace and a sexy glace.
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 January 2019

Rhyming lines of poetry! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 December 2018

beautifully composed- A poem is a poem only if we can sing and convey The beats of a heart in the pains of restlessness /// Poetry the beauty leads me into myself harem of heart Poetry the beauty shows me my own path of inside poetry the beauty teaches my the love to cover the whole creations of GOD Poetry the beauty guides me to be grateful to the great beautiful almighty GOD .../// lovely poem

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 December 2018

A clever and wonderful write that captures the very essence of poetry. ''A poem is a poem only if we can sing and convey the beats of a heart in the pains of restlessness. A brilliant line from a beautiful poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2018

Various voices are communicated through language. You are right. Poetry has musical note to attract us. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.

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