I want to write a poem that
It becomes a salty lake for coming back
It flies to the migrated turnagiller's wings
It becomes a wet kisses
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A thoroughly enjoyable poem with the really wonderful imagery. It is true beautiful things may gradually disappear, lose their grandeur, but they remain preserved in no better place than in the words of a poet.
Looking out at the landscape of Urmu Lake wanting to be a poem nurturing everything and making it beautiful and alive again. Very sentimental poem, I like it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Sangi Dar chah andakhteh shod ke biroon Avardanash sakht Ast. Ma 30 sal tamam be samt Naboodi Raftim. So beautiful. I like poem that talk about problems
İt must be lived until there is any copse. I have a bit of hope yet becaause i trust in coming back of last turnagiller. zende bashi aziz.
To shine into dazzle eyes I want to be a poem. What an amazing imagery is drawn here definitely. Wise poem shared with reality.10
Wow excellent...! What is the secret To writing such a lovely poem... pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my website & poems 2 thank you :)