Saturday, December 26, 2015

A Poem Comments

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I want to write a poem that
It becomes a salty lake for coming back
It flies to the migrated turnagiller's wings
It becomes a wet kisses
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mohammad ahmadizadeh
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Sarah Shahzad 14 January 2020

Wow excellent...! What is the secret To writing such a lovely poem... pleez do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my website & poems 2 thank you :)

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Souren Mondal 31 July 2016

A thoroughly enjoyable poem with the really wonderful imagery. It is true beautiful things may gradually disappear, lose their grandeur, but they remain preserved in no better place than in the words of a poet.

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Thank you for kind comment.

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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

Looking out at the landscape of Urmu Lake wanting to be a poem nurturing everything and making it beautiful and alive again. Very sentimental poem, I like it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Fatemeh Tarkashvand 27 December 2015

Sangi Dar chah andakhteh shod ke biroon Avardanash sakht Ast. Ma 30 sal tamam be samt Naboodi Raftim. So beautiful. I like poem that talk about problems

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 27 December 2015

İt must be lived until there is any copse. I have a bit of hope yet becaause i trust in coming back of last turnagiller. zende bashi aziz.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 December 2015

To shine into dazzle eyes I want to be a poem. What an amazing imagery is drawn here definitely. Wise poem shared with reality.10

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Mohammad Ahmadizadeh 26 December 2015

Thank you Kumaramani. I appreciate your words.

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