A Poem - 001 Comments

In a moment When the shy moon is impregnated By the blue desires of a Lily. Great poem sir. Thanks. 10+++

In a moment When the shy moon is impregnated By the blue desires of a Lily. Beautiful description. Thanks poet. 10+++

Subhas, this is a wonderful series that you are beginning of what a poem should be or is. Yes! i most heartily agree! I it is as good as breaking a way Into the most mysterious cave Looking forward to reading all. Thank you Subhas - A full vote

nicely penned.Thanks poet for the sharing. 10+++

When the shy moon is impregnated By the blue desires of a Lily. Beautiful. 10++++

Love the astonishing final image of a very good poem, Subhas.10 out of 10 from me.

In the land of Semi-dark shadows Cast upon the suffocating hearts By Souls divine and Bright By minds sharp and wise By fingers long and sensitive By lips wet, soft and attractive Nicely penned. Thanks

To write a poem Is a task, ........ Greatly thought and penned, By souls divine and bright, , ............ Thanks for sharing,10

In the land of Semi-dark shadows Cast upon the suffocating hearts By Souls divine and Bright By minds sharp and wise By fingers long and sensitive By lips wet, soft and attractive Nicely penned haiku. 10+++

By Souls divine and Bright By minds sharp and wise By fingers long and sensitive By lips wet, soft and attractive In a moment When the shy moon is impregnated By the blue desires of a Lily. Nicely penned. 10+++

Ask, task! Souls divine. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.