Friday, August 11, 2017

A Pluck On My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Renewed, washed like laundry on a clothesline
Waving in the wind, one of a kind, not a hint
Once magic was there, none compared
With the verve and vitality of me
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Doris Cornago
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2017

Moonlight sonata became a dirge on heart. Magic was there that renewed. An amazing verse is beautifully designed by words and shared. This is basing on your experience of life.10

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Doris Cornago 11 August 2017

Thank you Kumarmani. In this way, pain becomes beautiful - the way you look at it. :)

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Doris Cornago 11 August 2017

Redirecting your anger and pain into something productive like washing dirty clothes is one solution to surviving a breakup. Or taking up some craft like molding a likeness of your subject from sticky clay - be sure to shape the nose just so. Or learn painting from YouTube - high emotions will produce a lot of evocative still lifes or abstracts.

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