...A Pledge... Comments

I think this poem is about keeping promises. I like the picture you painted

A good delivery on your poem. You are very gifted and full of timely thoughts. Loved this.

Promise we'll not be like a date palm, ... nice nice akshita....10 grow tall but not to cause fall deliver he service with all he promises

doing always right, a great poem, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

a very inspirational poem...

pledge, it is verry nice.best wishes

An enjoyable read with insight and heart. Great job! ! !

the only true religion is the one that has universal love for all, thank you for sharing the pledge you write is one of absolute truth.

like a droplets of tears that flower a flower to remember the meaning of Hope and Life...Excellent and deep loving poem in this age....just pray that this poem be part of the archives in every Libraries we have....God bless

As they all say, practise what you preach~ :)

A very nyc poem.. I hope everyone follows it.. Luvd it...

pen is stronger than sword. Lovely write with strong diction.

its so niceee. agree with AUNG SI. keep it up :)

In a world that seeming is losing its mind, and a world of intellectuals and academics whose abstractions defile right reasoning you have stated the concrete. I'm sure we'll reach the height...! this verse is unquestionable truth.Well done! ! ! !

This pledge, when it comes from the heart, is ennobling! Let us try to abide by it! ! An inspiring write Akanksha!

Brilliant write Akanksha. I love it

very powerful and great write...............great message and truth..............reveals reality :)

A pledge against prejudice, war, religious fanatics, child exploitation. A pledge against the evil the sleep on men.Very well Akanksha! ! !

Valuable write....words are the powerful weapons...with words we can fight as well we can make love we the youngsters should keep in mind, the words you described.....good thinking..good work dear..! »so close«