Wednesday, March 2, 2016

A Pleasure Trip Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have forgiven the dog
who bit me uncalled
and the cat who entered my kitchen
and ate all the fruit custard
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Abhilasha Bhatt 10 March 2016

Beautiful poem on death......it seems death is not the part of life instead it is a whole life.....amazing .. Thank you for this wonderful sharing :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 March 2016

The journeys of life; with the muse of nature and, the end with death. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 March 2016

Very amazing and interesting poem on death really. Expecting to green trees to water with sweetness definitely determines strength of poetic imagery.10

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Kelly Kurt 03 March 2016

`No one else writes as lovely as this. The wording is melodious, the intent, burning and smoking, the passion unmitigated. Thank you for sharing with us.

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Kelly Kurt 03 March 2016

No one else writes as lovely as this. The wording is melodious, the intent, burning and smoking, the passion unmitigated. Thank you for sharing with us.

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Khalid Saifullah 03 March 2016

What a great metaphor of life and death.

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M Asim Nehal 02 March 2016

What a beautiful poem on death, there is a pleasure and hope in final journey and such thing can happen only when someone is self contend with the life he lived, Superb imagery, nice flow and metaphors, lived it Janab.....100+

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