Friday, February 11, 2011

A Pleasant Day Comments

Rating: 4.4

Everything is laughing singing,
All the pretty flowers are sprung.
See the campus in your fun,
With your knowledge in the blank sun.
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Harsh 12 January 2022

My grandmother has sung this poem all her life.It used to be a part of her syllabus

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Umang 12 January 2022

My grandmother keeps reminding us that this poem was part of their syllabus during their 2nd grade

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Umang 12 January 2022

Today we miss her, and these lines posted by you reminded me of her. Thanks very much for sharing this

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Umang 12 January 2022

She completed her schooling from Daman and Diu which was under the Portuguese during those times, knew this poem exact word to word. So please stop claiming that its your creation.

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Lakshmi gowda 06 September 2019

A very pleasant day and place

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A positive poem loaded with happiness!

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Full of fallings that are both pleasant and positive. Such a creative and captivating composition!

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2018

Lovely flow of thought embellished in beautiful poetic rhyme. Thanks for sharing Kumar.

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Kushi Kush 29 October 2013

Everything is laughing singing, Wat is that everything refers to Mr.abhimanyu kumar.s can u brief it

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Josephine Lauderrdale 15 June 2012

I find myself in some of your work and I hope you will take time to read some of mine. I am new to this sight and have as yet only put in about 30 or so poems but I have over 100 I would like to continue reading yours and hopefully get feedback from you on mine and I will do the same for you. Blessings

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Mark Holden 31 December 2011

enjoyed a lot in this day which is sweet, hope. laugh. dance, and all bright

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grame peele 03 November 2011

this poem is very pure and sweet. nice way of presenting such day.10+10+10+10+10

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lover of poetry sweet 02 September 2011

lovely piece of art. love to see your poems

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David Joel Rodriguez 20 August 2011

A pleasant poem for a pleasant day. Good work! David

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Maria C. Pires Costa 19 August 2011

I've enjoyed this short thread because it conveys a joyful, positive mood, which is a desirable way to start our day... One feels like being part of that 'merry ring'. Thanks for your invitation!

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Meitha Soekotjo 12 August 2011

light beautiful poem, nice!

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Geet Asher 19 July 2011

nice poem keep it up

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Esther Ayala 18 July 2011

First thank you for sending me a request. This is a great poem, I will rate it a 10. Hope you don't mind I added it to my poem list. keep up the good work in writing poems like this one.

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Adam Omar 13 July 2011

very simple rhyme & easy. Has the effect of reaching a lot of people who r able to understand it. It's merry! !

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Hans Vr 29 June 2011

I think that reading this poem aloud is a fantastic way to start a new day. Very well written. Optimism is a far better choice than pessimism.

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Hilton Ball 29 June 2011

nicely done and nice use of ryme i loved to ryme its just what i do

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Tanvi Damle 18 March 2011

itz a nice poem written in a gr8 way :)

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