Monday, September 29, 2008

A Plead To Life Comments

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I have become a metal sheet, an iron block,
Life hammers on me day and night.
Sheet pleads at each strike…
But the power of the next strike doubles at each cry.
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Abhishek Sharan
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 September 2008

Pure love is above all they say........by hook or by crook! Nice writes Abhishek.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 29 September 2008

Wonderful and powerful - well done!

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Joseph Poewhit 29 September 2008

Seperation brings much anguish

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Richa Dhodi 29 September 2008

Ok man good try... keep writiing... ciao

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Abhishek Sharan

Abhishek Sharan

Udaipur, Rajasthan
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