A Plea Of A Flea Comments

The poet has portrayed the scope and style of Michael Gale's poetry, quite passionately: tear us selfishly apart / break status' rampart you find liberation / and true salvation

Is it a rare gift you have my friend...iip..thanks you

Felt like that flea, wanting another dog to bite.

Great write! Enjoyed reading. Congrats!

dear shiddiqi well written yet you have to go miles.

wasn't really sure what it was about exactly but I enjoyed it. poems that don't really define themselves i feel are the best out there becuase it lets you feel however you want to feel about it. idk, i'm rambling. liked the flow of the poem and loved the simplicity of the last stanza. -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)

meaningful write..lovely...

Melancholy then hope and aceptance of truth. Good comunication very well written.

'tear selfish apart'... It is selfishness actually. These four lines are the key lines of the poem. Selfishness cannot be torn but transcended only with selflessness. This can be done only with a shift in our attitude. Our attitude towards life is the deciding factor. We should firmly believe that we are only an instrument in the hands of god- that we are sent here to serve this world in the best of our ways. We should not destroy the equillibrium of the entire universe. This is important. This is the selfless attitude.

I AM RUNNIUNG OUT OF ADJETIVE, AGAIN A GOOD ONE, I LIKE THIS PART why will be there when all jewel become ashes? why will be here when all crystal collapse? I THINK THAT IT IS A VEEEEEEEEEEEERY GOOD ONE

tear selfish apart break status' rampart you find liberation and true salvation. So true.I love these lines....it really feels nice to be there for somebody.

Plea of the flea, just might be..............................................Thee! good poem, Ahmad

A nice flow to this. I like some of the stanzas which are also very meaningful, but others are not of the same quality and their meaning is hard to grasp.

Now you have me itching ha ha! Good imagery in this write, 10 Lynda xx

cant find words for this poem dear....nice naizz

Powerful poetic display of emotions taken under life's reality....stunning! ! ! 10+++

This meaningful verse takes about truth! Nice poem!

Loved this too Ahmad, it has a chant like quality to it, an affirmation that all is well in the beautifully sublime, poetic lovers worlds...the ending seems only natural. Smiling at you, Tai

O foam of ocean! O fur of horizon! come to peace! come to grace! O Eve's daughters! O Adam's sons! go to Heaven! go to Eden! Beautiful is the word. 10+

This I am liking very much..thank you..