Monday, April 13, 2009

! A Plea Comments

Rating: 4.5

What good has the world done today,
what deeds that make it now a better place?
Very little do I feel.
My land, should be our land, for all to share.
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 17 June 2009

A very intense and appealing appeal from natures and life lover.Why opts for war when you know the only thing to resolve the conflicts is to get the main culprit killed and handle the rest with cautious.God give us brain to think! ! ! SO THINK! ! ! !

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 21 May 2009

I am drawn deeper and deeper by the poem''s every line, as it unfolds I feel the shame, the guilt, the regret...as if I were part of the scenario, now that''s great poetry Bob, truly an astonishing poem- for this plea from the heart I thank you

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Shweta Advani 10 May 2009

I have no words to appreciate ur poem Sir it has left me speechless...ur experience n wisdom comes across beautifully in this poem...Hope this Plea is heard n acted upon by all of us... 10 seems too small for ur poem: -)

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C. P. Sharma 26 April 2009

How much I wish it was our world, our dear world, our sweet world. CP

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salha kibwana 26 April 2009

its amazing how artistically you potrayed what is genuienly faced in this world..bravo once again..my favourite verses..'Please see the beauty, not the stain upon the land. We are so small upon the earth, yet feel we own it all, for us.'

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Kesav Easwaran 20 April 2009

beautiful poem, Bob...long one...your zest for telling goodness never ends short...thanks for this good write on humanity and universal love...10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 April 2009

Bob! We walked a long long way, away from living natural. We demolished beauty of Nature and living amidst, dangerous gases and other pollution. Another wonderful piece on the terrifying state of the world today

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Alf Hutchison 13 April 2009

'We (should) tolerate and share; not separate, and keep, ' should be on the doorpost of every man on earth...in years to come, Bob, it will read in the book of famous quotes...written by the famous South African philanthropist and philosopher Bob Blackwell...I love writes that make me stop and think...A joy to read thanks...regards Alf

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a genuine write from a genuine mind..instead of only the governing machinery getting into agreements which has'nt worked..it should be from the heart..accepting differences is a very mature thing which just the brain would'nt give

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Fay Slimm 13 April 2009

Amen to all this Bob - - - these are precious suggestions for a better planet and penned from a caring hand...... a wonderful poem stating truths with all your enthusiasm has got to be worthy of much more than I can give it..... but 10 + + ++ from Fay..

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