Tuesday, November 11, 2014

A Plea Comments

Rating: 4.9

That land was fertile and lively
Heavenly shore of peacefulness
They hymn to extol its worthiness
Breaks the silence with humbleness
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SALINI NAIR
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 November 2014

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Ramesh Rai 13 November 2014

Never smile beside as blameless No bud is safe in this heavenly yard As toxin dwells in the heart of someone To pluck the bud before it bloom! ! ! ! ! ! Great write and true at all

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 November 2014

A very comprehensible poem relevant in the context of today's mindset loaded with toxins which are potential threat to the chastity of a woman.........composed with excellent metaphor.....great write....10/10

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Valsa George 12 November 2014

Meaningful comparison! Just as a fertile land is polluted with the dumping of toxic waste, a chaste woman can be molested, seduced and destroyed! A girl child unfortunately is made to live in very vulnerable environs! Great write Salini!

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Akhtar Jawad 11 November 2014

A woman's life is fertile always A boon that metaphor always Never break the silence with rudeness A thunder storm that hidden inside A thoughtful poem.........10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 11 November 2014

Poem based on environmental problem and we all are facing ..a nice message an awareness poem thank you well thought and conceptualized..

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