Thursday, January 8, 2009

A Plea Comments

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Mummy, sing me to sleep.
I can't sleep mummy.
Horrid dreams haunt me.
Mummy, will you come from Heaven and hold me?
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Mahfooz Ali
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Anjali Sinha 17 January 2009

hey mamas lil boy your poem did touchhhhhhhhh me sad it looks you lost your mom but i know shes up there looking at you CAN A MOM FORGET HER OWN FLESH +++++10 anjali

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Lovleen Walia 17 January 2009

really a grt poem sir....but ur mummy is always wid u..no matter in what form.... but her blessings r always wid u.....

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Maryam Khan 12 January 2009

Fantastic, really really touching, sorry this happened, well done, the emotions came across very well and it brought a tear to my eye, beautiful, keep it up

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Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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