Tuesday, March 17, 2009

A Play Of Rays Comments

Rating: 5.0

a play of the sun rays in a glade
is a riddle for me whether the sun isn't abusing
its competence
dropping this hot a weapon
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Maria Barbara Korynt
COMMENTS

excellent write with deep and meaningful images...lovely to read

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Indira Renganathan 24 September 2009

Nice thematic nature-poem....lovely

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Nikunj Sharma 31 August 2009

this is 3 s for me - short, sweet and stimulating............also 3 E, exciting, exhilirating and enticing...good write

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 21 March 2009

very reliefing and very suprising! same as when Monet shook the world with his Impression: Sunrise. keep writing!

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Dagmara Anna 17 March 2009

Subtle and...hot poem :) Very nice. I like it.

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