Saturday, February 2, 2008

A Place To Pray Comments

Rating: 5.0

The autumn leaves fell to the ground
One crisp October day
As through the forest walked a man
To find a place to pray
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This poem is very beautiful as you describe Autumn in the air. The imagery is a delight and the forest sounds a very special place indeed. Karin Anderson

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Linda Moore 20 December 2008

Beauty in your words.........10

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Goran Gustafsson 10 December 2008

Beautiful poem. It feels like a line from one of my poems might fit in: 'The sounds of nature like a choir sings / A hymn to us it brings'

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Susan Witman 21 May 2008

it seems to beg for another line in conclusion as if it ends too abruptly. I hope that comment helps.

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Meggie Gultiano 09 March 2008

i particularly love the last stanza.Amen to this, Richard.. yes, i love this setting and i can directly communicate the Lord in this way..You have inspired me tis wonderful evening, your words are marvelous and the flow are simply beautiful and loving..thanks for this sharing..

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Andrew Blakemore 06 March 2008

I too find a forest a very spiritual place. This is a beautiful poem, well written. Top marks, Andrew.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 02 February 2008

Enjoyed this poem of your as well. Keep up the good work!

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C R Clark

C R Clark

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