The autumn leaves fell to the ground
One crisp October day
As through the forest walked a man
To find a place to pray
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Beautiful poem. It feels like a line from one of my poems might fit in: 'The sounds of nature like a choir sings / A hymn to us it brings'
it seems to beg for another line in conclusion as if it ends too abruptly. I hope that comment helps.
i particularly love the last stanza.Amen to this, Richard.. yes, i love this setting and i can directly communicate the Lord in this way..You have inspired me tis wonderful evening, your words are marvelous and the flow are simply beautiful and loving..thanks for this sharing..
I too find a forest a very spiritual place. This is a beautiful poem, well written. Top marks, Andrew.
Enjoyed this poem of your as well. Keep up the good work!
This poem is very beautiful as you describe Autumn in the air. The imagery is a delight and the forest sounds a very special place indeed. Karin Anderson