Sadness engullfs me,
Depression overtakes me.
I feel as if life is
a bottomless pit,
...
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sounds like paradise on earth to me..don't worry you can get there...another nice poem..keep writing
Nice, Alex, sad but nice. I hope you find your heavenly haven. Jon.
Great poem...sad poem...but I pray you find that place you are looking for, cuz it is out there.The fact that you are trying and still looking for it...whatever that it is for you...means one day you will get it. As for the poem itself it represents many people...what I mean is we all experience all those emotions sometimes.Life is not about how many times you get knocked down but what matters most is that you get back up everytime you fall to your knees...say a prayer. ((smile)) Keep trying.Keep writing as I enjoyed your poem. Take care of U. =Shelley=